Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Nitpicking as usual

Okay, never mind the title, I'm not trying to nitpick here, but just check the Invite to an alumni meeting from the PR committee in my college to the Alumni.
"We would be in pleasure to welcome you at the gate of XXX, where you will be stunned by the nostalgic memories that will be passing through your mind"
Seriously? I understand that we are not supposed to be perfect with our English and I'm the last person to be casting stones. But, this is unforgivable from a B-School student, let alone from someone representing the PR committee. Did no one review this email before it was sent?


From: PRCOM XXX
To: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Sent: Sat, 7 Feb 2009 13:44:52 +0530
Subject: Invitation for Sangam 2009 attached

Dear President of Alumni Association,

We are sending you the official invitation attached along with this mail.
Please forward this to our alumni. We kindly request all alumni to accept
this invitation as a personal invitation. We would be in pleasure to welcome
you at the gate of XXX, where you will be stunned by the nostalgic memories
that will be passing through your minds.

Thanking you
PRCOM
------- End of Forwarded Message -------

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